March 9, 2012

Anatomy of an eBook: Sequel to Save The Best For Last & The Heat of Heat

I have a first sentence!

Cesca slumped down in the car as she raised the cell phone to her ear.

FYI, she is hiding from a policeman.  In New York State, it is illegal to operate a motor vehicle while talking on a cell phone (unless it's a hands-free setup).  It's probably not the most exciting first sentence in the world, but as these things go I don't think it's bad.   


OA said...

Well Bettye, be assured that I can't wait to see you progress this first sentence and to read the book. I only just started reading your books and I have read all your contemporary books in the space of a week because I was just that captivated. So good luck with the writing.

bettye griffin said...

Thanks much, OA! I will do my best to provide you with a story you will love!