Moving On Up

My latest progress report:



I know it might look pathetic, but I'm rather pleased because I'm doing some other things as well. I've got a story in my head that just won't summarize. It's got a great guns beginning, and I can carry the tension, but I'm having difficulty with the aftermath of the black moment. Maybe the method I read about at Plotmonkeys will help me get un-stuck.

Hi-ho, hi-ho. It's back to work I go.